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San Francisco, where I live, has almost no rain from April to October.
Sometimes I miss a spring shower scene filled with breaths of living things.
This haiku by Hristo Paunov Ke Pella (ХристоПауновКеПелла) was from his haiku collection (2005) in Bulgarian Pages in Aozora Project (an international project between haiku poets, societies and magazines from South-east Europe).(*I'm sorry to hear that the Aozora project has been closed because of the lack of interest of people in that zone for an international site, from the webmaster Serge Tomé. The Bulgarian editors' addresses also didn't work, although I'm still trying to contact with the author.)
私の住むサンフランシスコでは４月から１０月にかけて雨はほとんど降りません。
命たちの息が伝わってくるような春の雨を懐かしく思い出します。
今月はブルガリアのHristo Paunov Ke Pella (ХристоПауновКеПелла)さんの俳句です。
南東ヨーロッパの国際俳句プロジェクトAozora のなかのブルガリアのページの
Hristo Paunov Ke Pellaさんの句集から採らせていただきました。
| The English verse by Hristo Paunov Ke Pella The fresh colours of the city I smell I watch with the eyes of rain The Bulgarian verse by ХристоПауновКе Пелла насвежакварел ухаеградът гледам сочитенадъжд |
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The Japanese translation by hoo 鮮やかな街の色を嗅ぎ雨の目で観る The EL translation by hoo       
 
    
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The symbols in the pictograph:
: rain (雨), :
eye (目), 
:
building (建物), 
:
tree (木)
The symbols in the translation:
(grammatical mark): to show an object of the verb of a sentence (他動詞の目的語を指す記号)
{
life,
{
heading
direction,
front} facing ahead}: fresh, lively (新鮮)
{33,23(this is a part of
light}:
color (色)
: (preposition
mark) to show the right ideogram modifies the left (前置符)
{
artificial,
{
{
place,
human)}
society,
vessel} town}: city (街・市)
{verb-mark,
preposition-mark}: to compose a verb to modify the front word (前の語を修飾する動詞を構成)
{
nose (as the
picture),
sense}: the sense of smell, smell (v. with
) (嗅覚、Ｄ動詞：匂いを感じる)
: the indicator of
the subject of a sentence (主語を指す記号)
{important/pronoun-maker, back} (this hand sign points at one's chest): I (私)
*If you don't mind if this subject is you or someone else to share the feeling,
EL can omit this subject. I omitted the subject in the Japanese translation,
because it's more natural in Japanese.
(ここでは英語に忠実に主語を入れて訳しましたが、この「私」は日本語同様に地球語でも省くほうが私は好きです。)
: (verb-mark) to
form a verb with the following ideogram (動詞を構成する動詞符)
{eye, heading}:
watching, gazing (観)
watch (the object after )
(見つめる )
{
joined, }: with (～で)
{
nature, 
water}:
rain (雨)
{
sense,
important thing} also as the picture: eye (目)